The Surface of Truth
Published: Jul 09, 2007
Revised: Jul 09, 2007
Words: 1,284
Genre: Sci-Fi
Type: Story
Revised: Jul 09, 2007
Words: 1,284
Genre: Sci-Fi
Type: Story
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My thoughts
The stuff inside of the Guardian was interesting. I have absolutely no clue what any of it means, More »
Good effort
But for me you "told" us too much instead of showing. Like that Uhura got some lines. The hall of More »
Mission #3
deadline 7.9.07 | 3PM PT
Your round three mission is to write a scenario in which the following occurs: Deepen the mystery of the Guardian's malfunction, describe what happens to Spock and Data (and their doppelgangers) after they pass through the portal, bring Kirk and Picard into greater conflict, and end on an even more suspenseful moment than the previous mission!
As always, feel free to bring other characters into the mix, but be sure to keep the main focus on Kirk and Picard: the conflict between them should be at its most intense in this part of the story, but don't try to resolve their conflict just yet.
I can't wait to see what you come up with next! Good luck!
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This is a great scene , I have no complaints