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The Guardian of Forever story

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Published: Jun 21, 2007
Revised: Jun 21, 2007
Words: 1,168
Genre: Sci-Fi
Type: Story
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Not bad

By: duke3571
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  On: Jun 21, 2007 12:28PM
I really like Kirk's log, while I read it I could really here him saying it in my head. The story More »

Beautiful Prose

By: cpt_ritter
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  On: Jun 25, 2007 07:12PM
Thank you for taking the courage to write prose. The flow is better, it easily is one of the best More »

Some very good elements

By: rjb
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  On: Jun 21, 2007 01:00PM
You write prose in a nice, clean style and you have the characters down. This is very enjoyable. The More »
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    Mission #1
    deadline 6.25.07 | 3PM PT

    Your mission is to write a scenario in which the following occurs: Kirk and a landing party stand before the Guardian of Forever as a violent storm rages. As Spock works his tricorder, Kirk questions the Guardian, but its answers are erratic, incoherent. Scotty hails them: Enterprise is losing power — they have to beam up now!

    Back on the Bridge, Kirk learns that warp drive and impulse engines are down. The ship is running on emergency power. More dire news: their orbit is decaying. Unless power is restored, the ship will burn up in the planet's atmosphere in less than 24 hours.

    We learn that Kirk came here to investigate disturbances in the local space / time continuum. The Guardian is malfunctioning, and if it can't be repaired, it could disrupt timelines throughout the sector — the history of the galaxy could be in jeopardy. It's imperative they get to the bottom of what's happening.

    A short time later, another starship closes on their position. It isn't in the registry. On the viewscreen, the unmistakable shape of Enterprise-D appears... a Federation Starship, but like none they've ever seen.

    On Enterprise-D, Picard and the Bridge Crew take in the view of the original Enterprise, suspended in time like a fly in amber...

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