Secrets and Past

This is a really good story! It seems very familer. Do you write on fanfiction.net. I am horribly forgetful, so Im not one hunderand percent sure, but I swear I have read this before.

This is really good! I like how you have organized the story to play out like that of the TV show. (What I know of it anyway.) As I said in my review before, though, expand a little on the detail. A good pointer is think of the five senses. What does the scene smell like? How is the texture of something a character is touching?

Thanks for sharing these on fanlib. I'm enjoying them. :-)

I really like this story! There's such a great plot to this, I just wish there'd been more detail! As is, it feels kind of rushed. More depth would've been really nice...maybe have the prologue be entirely about what happened to Jessica instead of just a police report about it, and then go more in depth with Chloe's feelings and the team's reactions and such.

Other than that, Great work!!