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One Wish

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Published: May 06, 2008
Revised: May 06, 2008
Words: 1,376
Genre: Romance
Type: Story
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Confusing but still Nice

By: jazz-wa
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  On: Apr 28, 2008 10:55PM
It was good but still it was sorta confusing. You should try to add more description.

nice

By: nejihyuuga
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  On: Apr 24, 2008 06:09AM
nice job

Quite nice

By: ice_dragon
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  On: May 16, 2008 02:36PM
You should clarify the characters a bit more, but other than that it's pretty good. Though who is More »
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