Night World: Secret Vampire, Chapter 4
Published: Apr 30, 2008
Revised: May 01, 2008
Words: 3,476
Genre: Horror
Type: Story
Revised: May 01, 2008
Words: 3,476
Genre: Horror
Type: Story
Night World: Secret Vampire, Chapter 4
Beware the creatures of the Night World. They're beautiful, irresistible… and deadly.
The Night World -- a secret society of vampires, werewolves, witches, and creatures of the night who live among us. Their laws say it's ok to hunt humans, to toy with their hearts -- even to kill them. This 1st volume of NIGHT WORLD by L.J. Smith features 3 stories about what happens when the rules get broken. From Pulse Books, available everywhere books are sold in June.
The Night World . . . Love has never been so dangerous.
The Night World isn’t a place. It’s all around us. The creatures of Night World are beautiful and deadly and irresistible to humans. Your best friend could be one—so could your crush.
The laws of Night World are very clear: humans must never learn that Night World exists. And members of Night World must never fall in love with a human. Violate the laws and the consequences are terrifying.
These are the stories about what happens when the rules get broken.
Chapter 4
Poppy was staring without appetite at a dinner tray of chicken nuggets and french fries when Dr. Franklin came in the room.
The tests were over. The CAT scan had been all right, if claustrophobic, but the ERCP had been awful. Poppy could still feel the ghost of the tube in her throat every time she swallowed.
"You’re leaving all this great hospital food," Dr. Franklin said with gentle humor. Poppy managed a smile for him.
He went on talking about innocuous things. He didn’t say anything about the test results, and Poppy had no idea when they were supposed to come in. She was suspicious of Dr. Franklin, though. Something about him, the gentle way he patted her foot under the blanket or the shadows around his eyes . . .
When he casually suggested that Poppy’s mother might want to "come for a little walk down the hall," Poppy’s suspicion crystallized.
He’s going to tell her. He’s got the results, but he doesn’t want me to know.
Her plan was made in the same instant. She yawned and said, "Go on, Mom; I’m a little bit sleepy." Then she lay back and shut her eyes.
As soon as they were gone, she got off the bed. She watched their retreating backs as they went down the hall into another doorway. Then, in her stocking feet, she quietly followed them.
She was delayed for several minutes at the nursing station. "Just stretching my legs," she said to a nurse who looked inquiringly at her, and she pretended to be walking at random. When the nurse picked up a clipboard and went into one of the patients’ rooms, Poppy hurried on down the corridor.
The room at the end was the waiting room—she’d seen it earlier. It had a TV and a complete kitchen setup so relatives could hang out in comfort. The door was ajar and Poppy approached it stealthily. She could hear the low rumble of Dr. Franklin’s voice, but she couldn’t hear what he was saying.
Very cautiously Poppy edged closer.
She chanced one look around the door.She saw at once that there was no need for caution. Everyone in that room was completely occupied.
Dr. Franklin was sitting on one of the couches. Beside him was an African-American woman with glasses on a chain around her neck. She was wearing the white coat of a doctor.
On the other couch was Poppy’s stepfather, Cliff. His normally perfect dark hair was slightly mussed, his rock-steady jaw was working. He had his arm around her mother. Dr. Franklin was talking to both of them, his hand on her mother’s shoulder.
And Poppy’s mother was sobbing.
Poppy pulled back from the doorway.
Oh, my God. I’ve got it.
She’d never seen her mother cry before. Not when Poppy’s grandmother had died, not during the divorce from Poppy’s father. Her mother’s specialty was coping with things; she was the best coper Poppy had ever known.
But now . . .
I’ve got it. I’ve definitely got it.
Still, maybe it wasn’t so bad. Her mom was shocked, okay, that was natural. But it didn’t mean that Poppy was going to die or anything. Poppy had all of modern medicine on her side.
She kept telling herself this as she edged away from the waiting room.
She didn’t edge fast enough, though. Before she got out of earshot, she heard her mother’s voice, raised in something like anguish.
"My baby. Oh, my little girl."
Poppy froze.
And then Cliff, loud and angry: "You’re trying to tell me there’s nothing?"
Poppy couldn’t feel her own breathing. Against her will, she moved back to the door.
"Dr. Loftus is an oncologist; an expert on this sort of cancer. She can explain better than I can," Dr. Franklin was saying.
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Vampires, Vampires, Everywhere...
By: marphlets On: May 07, 2008 01:27AM
There have been quite a few new vamp fics out lately. Underworld, 30 Days, Twilight - they're every More »
There have been quite a few new vamp fics out lately. Underworld, 30 Days, Twilight - they're every where. To survive in the ever growing masses, you have to stand out. You have to have that one thing - whatever it is - that sets you apart from your sister fiction.
For you, that, apparently, is a Faustian bargain. Poppy receives a reprieve, but only if she accepts the darkness. I can't tell from this tidbit if your vamps suck blood or not. Perhaps this boy doesn't but others do, a la Twilight. Or perhaps you give a completely new twist on vampire lore, eh?
I think Poppy is what makes your fic. Her life and pain are seared into the mind of the reader, leaving room for vampires, werewolves, and witches to make their entrance. Her situation seems genuine. I can easily see the beginning fitting in with a Grey's Anatomy episode or something like it. It gives this story a real-life merit - a realistic leg to stand on. I also like that you use all the types "night creatures" instead of just one or two. That thought and anticipation of what this "Night World" will look like, really make the imagination tingle.
That last moment could have been a little tricky. James confessing he is a vampire could have been super cheesy. Most authors or directors choose to simply show the confession - mortal sees vampire bare his teeth to save her, no need for talk. You seem to have chosen to "hang a lantern on it." Nice bit with the "I feel like somebody in a bad horror movie," line. You kept it simple. I believe I've heard a smart person or two call that the mark of a true writer. :)
You left us at a good spot, though I would liked to have seen more of James and his life-saving mission - which, I imagine, was the point ;) I enjoyed it! Where do I get the rest?
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By: knockedout On: May 08, 2008 08:29PM
L.J. Smith...Isn't this series pretty old? I read almost all of them a few years ago. This could be More »
L.J. Smith...Isn't this series pretty old? I read almost all of them a few years ago. This could be the newest book in the series, but I'm pretty sure I've seen the cover [that I found on Google] before.
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