My Last Breath

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Published: May 01, 2008
Revised: May 01, 2008
Words: 111
Genre: Drabble
Type: Story
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Great opening line and way to end…

By: maryilee
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  On: May 30, 2008 09:09AM
Great opening line and way to end it on a cliffhanger. Good job!

Excellent!

By: ktina
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  On: May 29, 2008 12:17PM
It totally and completely brought Norrington to mind. Very good job, Leila.

Dying Breath

By: deckard
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  On: May 01, 2008 07:27AM
What a wonderful POV from James Norrington! Those were the things you knew must have been going More »
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    deadline 06.07.08 | 12.00 PM PDT
    Drabble Challenge!
    Can you write all that you want said with a limit of 100 words? Try and fit in as much drama/comedy/action/sadness as you can with 100 words in this drabble challenge. 99 words? Add one! 102 words? Better edit something out! Anything over or under 100 words will not be qualified for finalist! Good Luck!

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