Lost Without You

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Published: Jun 13, 2008
Revised: Jun 13, 2008
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Genre: Anime
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By inu-babe34

from Inuyasha

Tags: inuyasha, kagome, love, action, miroku, sango

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Lost Without You

Does love really overcome all?

When their final battle ends will Kagome choose to stay with Inuyasha or will she be lost, without him?

Lost Without you

Thanks to the readers of my poem!! They were really nice so I decided to give them a story, this is to you kagomeyayz and xxvampireheartxx!!!! Hope you like it. I do not own Inuyasha, or the picture above!!

Chapter 1: Oblivion

No, what is he doing? Can't he see that I love him? Why is he going with her?

Inuyasha was holding Kikyo as they were slowly descending into hell. Kagome tried to run to him but she couldn't move. It was like she was plastered to the spot.

"INUYASHA!!" Kagome screamed tears flooding her eyes. He stared at her for the longest time.

"Kagome, you are just a stupid human, and now that Kikyo is back I am going to hell with her. You can't say anything to make me stay. I was just using you to get the sacred jewel. Now go back to your own time where you belong, you were never meant to be here. NOW GO!!!!!!" Inuyasha yelled at her.

She still could not move. She was just staring blankly at her true love. She loved him, did he not understand this? She was finally forced to move as Kikyo chanted something as they descended into hell. Kagome slowly walked away, unable to speak. She grabbed a discarded sword an with a quick motion stabbed herself in the heart.

Before she died, Kagome was able to mutter these simple words "I'll always love you". And with that her soul was thrown into oblivion.

Hope you enjoyed, it was my first chapter and i worked really hard to think of a fanfic. R&R please, luv you all, INU-BABE34 ^_^

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LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

By: inuyasha

On: May 17, 2008 07:55PM

I loved it!!! PLEASE continue, that was SO cool, Inuyasha and Kagome FOREVER, LOVE IT, thanks for More »

I loved it!!! PLEASE continue, that was SO cool, Inuyasha and Kagome FOREVER, LOVE IT, thanks for updating!!!!!

Looks like Inuyasha and Kagome are rubbing off on each other, Inuyasha was softer and Kagome was a bit meaner, I loved it!! so awesome! PLEASE continue!♥

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Love the story and I love you♥!!!

By: inuyasha

On: May 24, 2008 02:09PM

I love the story soooo much, I cant even put it in words, if the rating was higher I would SO give More »

I love the story soooo much, I cant even put it in words, if the rating was higher I would SO give you a TRILLION stars!! I LOVE the story TONS, I hope your surgery goes well!! *kisses your knee* ^-^ good luck!! I'll miss ya while ur off getting the surgery done!! GREAT job with the story, your an EXCELLENT AMAZING writer.

I love how Sango might be pregnant with twins, how Kikyo went to hell finally and I REALLY hope the curses wont come true!!! Cuz if Kags cant have a baby, that's sad....PLEASE continue, I REALLY have to know what happens next!!!!

I love you like a circle, it will always be forever *hug*

LOVE YA∞~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Hm..what's the word for it? MORE then magnificent

By: inuyasha

On: Jun 04, 2008 02:04PM

Thank you for what you wrote, I LOVE it soooooooooo ∞ much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's More »

Thank you for what you wrote, I LOVE it soooooooooo ∞ much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's amazingly cute, PLEASE continue when you have time and feel like it!!! LOVE this story and I think you are an AMAZING writer, you have VERY great perspectives, view, creativity and a VERY great idea. PLEASE continue I really love it soooo much and cant wait until you update again, LOVE YA!!!!

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