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Leaving Camp

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Favorited: 1 
Published: May 16, 2008
Revised: May 18, 2008
Words: 1,176
Genre: Action & Adventure
Type: Story
3 ratings
By em-oh
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Pretty Good

By: tina-wa
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  On: May 28, 2008 08:04AM
I liked the storyline and the plot, but I think you should work on grammar and punctuation. There More »

Good

By: ohsobubbly
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  On: May 18, 2008 01:20PM
This is pretty good i like your story line. keep it going =]

GREAT

By: kayjohnny101
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  On: Jun 10, 2008 05:26PM
really great!!!!! i loved it !!! please keep writitng!!!!!!!!! is that supposed to mean Shay is More »
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