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Waz just wondering if you could take a look at my Naruto story and give it a review? PLEASE???

Well for me i prefer it all in one hit, i guess it's cas i'm immpacient.

by the way soz i can't spell!

Disclamer: Don't own caricters

chapter 1:

As i prepared for my wedding i relised i was exitted! Bella Swan was exited about getting married! i sat there fiddilling with my hair humming to my self when i hered a 'Knock, knok' "come in" i called

"hello Bella" a fermilliar voice called

i turned a standing in the dorway was "Jane! what....wh'?" i stumbled frozen in fear

"Bella, Bella, Bella" she laghed "Aro is looking forwared to seeing you, and on your wedding day to!" her voice might have bean beautifull but to me it was like talikng to deth hersellf

"what... what are you doing hear?" i stammered

" i'm taking you to italy, wher" she grimced " unfortunatlly Aro wants you to become one of us"

"Aro whant WHAT?" I managed to say

she sighed "just come quietlly and no one will get hurt, i mean you woulden't want your pore Edwared to get hurt would you?"

i sat sterring, frozzen in fear and shock.
Jane walked over to me and grabed my hands in one firm hold, than she was holding sompthing black and then the world whent dark.

chapter 2:

i awoke in a dark unfermilliar room, my hed pounding, i looked down at myself, i was still in my wedding dress.

"your finally awake i see"

i jumped lokking around, and there in the couner of the room stood Aro
he walked up to me faster than the eye can see and stood looking down at me.

"well,well i hope your reddy for an experians most people would die for....even thogh in a sence you will be ded but the saying still gose."

he continued looking at me with eyes deap bloud red and then he moved so quikly that at first i wasent even shure what happened but than tha pain came, the fier reterned to my hand and i herd him merrmer...
" well she dose tast good but still i wan't to see how this turnes out... and i see theres an eclipss well now that should be worth the fun!"
somones other voice brock over my screeam
"what dose an eclipps do Aro?"
"well you see an eclipps makes it that she will be much more powerfull.. in saying that she is garanteed atlesst two special abillateys!"
and than the world closed in around me and i herd no more.