I hope you decide to finish this story. While I'm not an avid CSI fan I'm familiar enough with the fandom to really get into this story! Nick is my favorite on the show so seeing him involved this way really has me on the edge of my seat!

and the chapter stops at Nick falling unconcious. You have a great way of grabbing your readers, but you should totally finish this story, it's too amazing to stop now. I must admit I've only read a few CSI fan fics (I'm not fond of GSR) but this one was just too good to pass up.

I don't really have anything constructive to say right now, nothing really caught my eye, a few spelling and grammar mistakes, but nothing huge. The pace was good and I loved how you confused the rader at the first chapter, making us think it was someone else then popping the real person at us. Um I think that's it

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i like it....its a good story, though i dont believe don would just give up like that, he would want to get the ahole after five years. Though he might explode in some parts, i dont think he would resort to drinking heavily, his family wouldnt let him. all in all a good story, cant wait for the rest, this guy really needs to go down.