well.. uhh.. u wanted us to tell u how much it rocked..

IT DIDNT ROCK AT ALL... IT RULED.

It was both confusing and funny tho LOL

I dont kno who Itachi is but it looked funny..

Especially the way the boys were looking at him LOL!!!!

So your poem was random,confusing,ruling,funny... and ya know. lol

totaly awesome! Hilariuous! Oh, this is so a favorite. I loved how Yuu got back at poor Lavi. (Poor Lavi..... :-) Love the stroy, I was laughing throughout the whole thing! I love Lavi, he's just the bomb, Kanda.... He's a chip off the old block. He was so good in this story. I loved it.

And as you asked, I'll tell you some of the mistakes ya made. Look at how you use words. Like past or present. Some of them were mixed up, but still! A wodnerful story!