I don't think you quite made the image look like an oil painting, but it's still cute. The TARDIS is really great looking. The wormhole looks a little more like a kids painting, but it's still cool. Keep on trucking.

Adama will freak when he hears Tigh say "by your command!" However, I don't think Tigh will ever say it. I think Tigh is too stubborn to even admit to himself that he is a Cylon. Col Tigh ROCKS!! LOL! :)

It does have the rythm of the song, no doubt. I think it would've flowed better if it rhymed some but this was creative so kudos to that! Nice job!

I think this is a cute little funny piece. If I really remembered the tune of Puff, the Magic Dragon, it might make a little more sense in the rhythm. There's no rhyme scheme really either and that throws me off as well. Overall, I like it, especially the last two lines.