As you admit in the end, you need to fix your spelling. As it is now, it makes the story confusing, so I'm not entirely sure what's going on. I'd suggest running it through a spelling and grammar check, getting a beta reader to catch and fix your errors, or both, as you have errors that are easy enough to fix in both categories. Also, you seem to switch which character the girl is talking to partially through, which is confusing, as there are no lables on the dialogue. With work, this could be interesting.

i cant read that much.

to many grammar mistakes.

can you maybe add who said what? it may make it more easy to read

there are quite a few spelling errors, and some grammar as well. all in all, good beginning, but please work on the spelling. i don't mean to be harsh, but it's the truth.