Oh so very lovely. Both of these scenes are just perfect lit moments. I wish the last one had happened in the show...guess I'll just have to read this story over and over again and pretend that it did. Great work!

...and I, apparently review fanfics. Diff'rent strokes for diff'rent folks I guess. That's my way of saying that I stayed up to watch the clocks change last night, and, thanks to caffeine and my responsibility to be perky while singing to three year olds every Sunday, I am (hopefully) coherent enough to review fanfics. (Of course, judging by that opening, I highly doubt it.) And, yes, I am one of those people who are way too perky in the morning, even when functioning on less than four hours of sleep. I actually annoy myself sometimes.

Anyway, onto the review portion of our ramblings. The format of this story was excellent, especially with the plot line. It really seemed to fit with how Cameron was feeling as she tried to capture her dreams. You also made an excellent observation about how much she explains herself; it's so true. And, I loved how Chase called her out on it...and then she continues to explain herself. That was a nice bit.

I loved the ending. It was the come-back to the beginning. I always enjoy fics that call back to the beginning at the end. It makes the story come full circle, which is nice.

I love your story. Jess and Rorys relationship revolved around the bridge. That was Jess's place to go. I think you tied up there loose ends perfectly. Awesome Job!