OMG this was so heartwrenching! ;___; The way she is all I forgive you just broke my heart and Karl folding in on himself with those final words wow so powerful!

As much as I can't stand Starbuck i really enjoyed reading Sharons thoughts on her and how her perspective of death changed because of her family. The more I read your works on Karl and Sharon the more I come to love them <3

Oh wow this was so intense and yet gentle too. I love the transition of Helo's thoughts how he struggles to win the losing battle against his heart. Even now when he does see just a /machine/ he can't hurt her, he's just too noble. Though I can't stand Starbuck I found myself enjoying your portayal of her you made her believable without turning her into the Mary sue that she is. Wonderful job!

You have a real talent for writing the scenes that wound up on the cutting room floor. This totally makes sense given how much both Lee and Helo mean to Kara in 'Scar'. She tries to frak Lee, but she leans on Helo, and I can totally see Helo staying the night for Kara. This is just great character work. Nice job.

I always thought that Gaeta calling 'Athena' Sharon in Flight of the Phoenix was kind of fic fodder. I like how you point out that that was the actual moment that Sharon actually committed treason. Great work all around. Can't help you come up with a title though. Sorry.