Go Burns! Seriously awesome chapter here. Poor Koi, though; making her believe that she had killed a little boy was very cruel.

This is an exceptional story! =)

I like how you managed to fit all of major players in recent Klingon history. I also enjoyed the reference to Archer at the end. It's a nice touch of unity in Star Trek's disparate worlds. Good work.

Again I like the idea of a Federation news article, but this one is a little short. Instead of a profile of Martok based on what other people have said, I would like to have read an actual interview. It would have been fun to see what articles of furniture went flying across the room. It needs some work, but it's a very promising start.