except that it's Sorcerer's Stone, not Philosopher's Stone. i like it. it's a totally new way of writing!

For the first Harry Potter fan/fic I've read, this was very entertaining. I thought it was well written. Clever, even. I've got four big ugly baby turkeys that keep coming into my yard and as I read your story, I pictured the Occamy as one of them, only bigger. Quite humorous. Also well done as far as the contest went. I started mine a day before the contest was going to end and so the pressure was on. I don't know how much time you had, but all in all, this was a good story.

Well Done! Your story has the most natrual use of text thus far. it doesn't hurt you used Katie Bell and Angelina Johnson in the story either :)

You worried too much. It was cute and a quick bit of fun. I'm glad read it!

I loved both parts of this. Draco and Harry made an interesting contrast. After now having read the final book I wish that you could continue this. Thanks, Beth Palladino