Poor James. Poor Jones. :( This is a sweet little story. It is beautifully written and very touching. Very nice job. :)

and your mind fills in all the gaps beautifully! I could see Jack staring off into nothingness saying "What he said" and then focusing on someone's face with a questioning grin. The dialogue was well done and this playful story is full of fun and fantasy. Luckily Leia and Shilom didn't have to endure the asylum all by their onesies, they found each other and then found the way out. :)

This piece sounds just like our friend Riley, and is an interesting opening to a story I will be following. I hope you continue to write on it. I am a fan of Majestic, Project Blue Book, Groom Lake, Roswell, you name it. :)

I am eager to read some of your ideas about these subjects, set in the National Treasure vehicle. :)