This is a good but sad story. I would have loved more details. Also, the part where the hero arrives just in time to hear a friend's dying words was a bit cliche. But this was enjoyable. You did a good job with the emotions.

This. Is. Bloody. Brilliant.

I am such a Supernatural/Potterverse crossover fangirl, but I've never read one that made me LAUGH like this one! Talk about fantastic!!!!

Attacking and torturing a single man like that is cruel, wrong, and very unfair, especially since he didn't do anything wrong. Sure, he helped to release a great evil once, but he fought it twice (And with a new Mummy movie coming out, it looks like he's going to go for third time the charm, major squee!). Those who did it to him deserved to be slaughtered, and hopefully the young and dumb ones get some form of punishment as well. A great, although very sad, piece.