Great job! You definitely took the universe that already existed in the books and made it your own by imagining a world that wasn't fully-formed yet. I love the idea of the attention-getting pranks and how society might lamely attempt to increase face count without really understanding the science of spin.

My only gripe is that some of your slang sounded a bit "Rusty" (haha, as in from our time and not theirs) and you could use a quick copy-edit, nothing major.

LOVE Mr. Karma Chameleon guy. That would translate beautifully into the screenplay. Paging ILM, we have an effects job for you! :)

Great job making fame so central into your story; it really related to Extras because of that. I also enjoyed Aya's interaction with Ren. Very nice.

with this story. That said, I like how Aya went about helping out a friend. I enjoyed the dialogue greatly. Good luck with your entry!

This was a good story, but I felt like it was a bit rough. I also thought that kicking wasn't around for about the first year, and Hiro decided to do it after many other things. Still, good job and I liked the Chameleon head at the beginning.

Well handled story that really deals with the loose threads in this ongoing story. Good pacing and dialogue. Had to deduct 80 quatloos for your "button on the scene" came off weaker than the rest of your submission but over all a very strong contender.

Very well played.