I usually don't read much on sexual abuse...so I can't give you any comments on that part...but as far as the flow of the story and the sentence structures goes...it's pretty good, I got to say. Yeah, there are some spelling and grammar errors, but just read the story again slowly and those could be easily fixed. Well done! I look forward to reading more of your work...

This is great and such a powerful story. And it's really great for your first time writing a story in English. You do have a few mistakes, mostly with switching verb tenses from past to present, but this is still very powerful and well done.

Wow, for your first story this was very good. There are a few mistakes, mainly with the past/present tenses, you bounce around a little, but I know I do that a lot too. It's something that takes time to get down. But overall this was really good. There were great emotional build-ups, and good back stories to your characters. I really liked the end, too.