With Jacqueline, Siroc and Sancia in the Seine, d'Artagnan and Ramon seek their own trouble. But it wasn't a total wash; d'Artagnan did locate the woman he sought and learned something about his friend in the process.

I love the details you put in this chapter. I could see the affects of the rain on the city of Paris. And I could smell the stables, stocked with slaves. The pictures you paint of the despicable trade of human lives is sobering. D'Artagnan wasn't the only one to see it first hand and learn something about it. The reader was right there with him.

Dani, I've been so wanting you to put this story up here on fanlib. Thanks a million!

Every page hold the reader riveted to their seat in suspense. You have a wonderful talent for detail and for bringing the inner character to the page. This is a story that can't be put down once started. lol Can't wait to see where you take Siroc and the others next.

Bravo for taking the beloved cast of Young Blades and sculpting them into an original fic. This is fan fiction at its best! I can't recommend this story enough. A must read for the fan and non-fan alike!

I catch this show on saturday afternoons,(april 2008), I can't believe it was done in 2005, what happened ! It's so hit and miss catching the show is someitmes impossible, terrible scheduling. The above write up..is this an acutal episode? Can I see this episode somewhere? I'd like to catch more of them. I know you tube ahs some but not this one you've typed. Is it the last one of the 13 episodes. They really should bring this back, too bad.

I loved it. Your writing style is different than most, but it flows so smoothly and it makes it easy for the reader to be drawn into your world.

Beautiful :)