i would love to help....well....you could always send sakura, neji, and some other people to the leaf village and get them to spy for awhile.....and...i guess....we could talk private...becuase people like to steal ideas...so private message me and i'll tell you the rest if you like this

I like the idea that you have...how its going to have a group like the Akatsuki, but with all the main characters. But like other people have said, its really diificult to understand who's talking. In your story the words are all bunched together, you should spread it out more and say who it is that is talking. I can't wait to see what you do with the story!!