Adorable isn't QUITE the right word, but nonetheless, this story is just so sweet despite its edge of sadness. Beautifully written - Jack and Elizabeth are both perfectly in character, and I can totally see this happening somewhere within the actual movie. Great work!

Very sweet oneshot here. I like the idea - trying to determine each of their scents. Mostly the piece is well-written, but there are some sentences that could have been structured a little better - they sound awkward as they are - and there are a few misused/misspelled words - like "plead" for "pled" and "bobbles" for "baubles." But otherwise this is a lovely piece. Good job!

This is a good Sparrabeth piece here. I admit I struggle with the concept of Jack being in love - his love of freedom seems like it would always overtake any love he might have of a woman. But then, Elizabeth is fond of her freedom, too. Elizabeth is very well written here, very distraught and desperate to hang out to shreds of something that no longer exist. Will is interesting, definitely - that he would still stab the heart despite marrying Elizabeth... is actually very Will. Great work here, and I hope to read more soon!

Woah now this is an intense beginning! I love how despite hte marriage these two clearly have their own agenda. I loved too how Liz realizes her husband is naive and always will be hehe Poor Jack trying to convince himself that he doesn't give a damn!

Aww! This was so bittersweet! I love how he expresses his feelings through his touch and how for a moment in time they had that connection but only one really understands its meaning! I love it!