That really affected me for a second then, tbh, I hate it when people judge people as 'emo's' when they cut themselves, even though I have never done it myself, it still affects me, as I have known people to do it, I can't imagine why people would judge you because of it.

Very well written poem, you know the charactor and their point of view is so accurate.

This is pretty good but kind of unrealistic to me. Being that I've been there and done that, it's just a lot more painful and a lot slower than this, and there's usually a change of heart right at the end rather than a surrender. No matter how much we may one to die, when death comes we usually don't just bow down. Good work though.

...the urge to cut. But what is the motive behind the cutting? Why the need to harm oneself? I suppose it's a way of dealing with emotional pain by making it physical? Still, I find it disturbing that someone would want to harm themselves in that way, that they'd want to die by the blade. I too hope that you have a good support system if you are in fact, doing this to yourself.

I think you very well described the urge of cutting with this poem, at least how I imagine the urge has to feel. But you seem to focus a lot on the mechanics of taking suicide, but there's nothing here on what drives this person other than the magnetism of the blade. There are limits to what a poem can entail, of course, before it turns into a story, but I am curious to what it is that drives this person. Why are they drawn to cutting in the first place? Is it depression? Curiousity? A cry for help? For attention? When this person starts cutting, do they intend to take their own life? Is this their goal? Or is the suicide just something that happens, something that they didn't intend to do until sometime after the blade pierced the skin?