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em-oh

if love is a sickness ,then i'll stay sick,

Date Joined: May 11, 2008
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Finally

Added: May 11, 2008 06:34PM For: Thousand Faces Party

Write more

Added: May 11, 2008 02:13PM For: David Proposes

This is touching

Added: May 11, 2008 02:07PM For: I'm Sorry

*tear tear* Lol

Added: May 11, 2008 02:03PM For: Starting Over-When Zane Dies

good stuff

Added: May 11, 2008 01:45PM For: A Different Way of Seeing Things
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By em-oh, from Uglies
Leaving camp
This is the 2nd part , the Ruins is the first so to make sense of it all you're better off reading the Ruins (what i posted) before this. David's mom realizes David loves Tally.Leaving camp they had to choose between four paths, they chose one knowing that that one was there best chance and it led them to somethin they never expected.
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When Tally stayed with Zane at the Ruins because he had the tracker in his tooth
((read this before the others)) You see i hated the fact that Tally stayed with Zane to go back with him to special circumstances.I wanted her to go with David. So here's my story, the one where she ends up with David.It goes like this:
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GREAT

For: Leaving Camp
By: kayjohnny101
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  On: Jun 10, 2008 05:26PM
really great!!!!! i loved it !!! please keep writitng!!!!!!!!! is that supposed to mean Shay is More »

great! i loved it! i cant wait to…

great! i loved it! i cant wait to read more and nice way of doing tally leaving zane but the way she More »

Pretty Good

For: Leaving Camp
By: tina-wa
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  On: May 28, 2008 08:04AM
I liked the storyline and the plot, but I think you should work on grammar and punctuation. There More »

I like the storyline

For: The Ruins(when zane has the locater in his tooth)
By: tina-wa
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  On: May 26, 2008 06:36PM
But Tally doesn't seem like the kind of person who would have left Zane. The punctuation needs some More »

Good

For: Leaving Camp
By: ohsobubbly
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  On: May 18, 2008 01:20PM
This is pretty good i like your story line. keep it going =]