Now that would be some meeting....Kirk, Spock and McCoy with Picard, Data...and young Wesley..... um, somehow I can't see Kirk tolerating that young man. :) Now, if ever a Marty-Stu was inwented...! But you use all your characters here very effectively. You may be keeping an eye on the Critique Forum and the subjects discussed there. One such subject was the use of 'said' in dialogue. You have some very interesting tags here, one being 'their host ignited his greeting.....' maybe that could be simplified. I think Mr Antok is up to no good... or maybe he's a bit like Q and likes tampering in other people's lives. Hopefully we shall see by and by.

I am absolutely blown away by the inventive and unique ideas you have written here. A perfect gelling of the past and the future with the comical yet diabolical Mr. Antok in the middle!! The voices were perfection as well as the cliff hanger! More!

Great story :D and I like the Tucker Corridor hehe. And the banter between Spock and Bones made me LOL. You've captured all the characters so well. It really feels like I'm in the scene watching them. Wonderful job :)