That was so sad. I loved how you used Anna Nalick's song, Breathe (2AM), throughout the story. Also the ending was very well done. I liked how you summed everything up at the very end.

The only thing I found wrong with it was a couple of typos thats it. No big deal!!!

Except fot that, it was beautifully written. :)

i have read this over and over again and this is really good you are such a good writer please write another story!

this was so sad but it was a really good story it was just really sad and depressing but you are a great story you should really write another one