and beautiful. Such an amazing piece that amazingly captures that lighter than air essence of our true other: "She is the very air that I breathed, the vacant places of my soul and the strength that masked my weaknesses." Exquisite.

Winter on Delaya with Dormé must have been quite a tantilizing time for Lord Vader. Her ability to absolutely control him with a word and a sideways glance is amazing. Your words flow effortlessly and paint a beautiful scene. Fantastic!

Poor, tragic, tortured Anakin seems to have slight alterations of his beloved all around him. Her loyal bodyguards were brought into service because of their similar features and look. They all favored her, yet were different in their own way. Each unique, yet familiar to him. Each exotic and tempting. This is another excellent piece revealing Vader's remaining human needs, and desires. She can save him. Wonderful work. :)

Your words flow effortlessly, revealing Anakin's inner longing for Dormé. I can feel his lust for her, sense the unrewarded longing of his fantasies. This is an amazing look into the male perspective of viewing beauty from afar, and sometimes only a few feet. Deliciously bittersweet. She knows of his longing and when she cathes him, makes him squirm for just a moment, then release him from his discomfort. I feel she is definitely in control, and may someday allow her own inner feelings and longings for him overshadow her loyalty to her queen. EXCELLENT WORK!

I love this darkly romantic and sensual image. It takes my breath away to even think about these two. I can very much relate to the idea behind it, your mind and mine...think very much alike...danger is bliss.