Who is They!?! In u seriously need to do sum work on this peom big time kinda fix it plz in then i will come back in read it........

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Hmmm... well, as simple as this poem is, it does describe with basic terms how complicated love is. 'Cause, honestly, how do you know you are really, truly in love? My favorite line is: “is it in your heart or in the hallmark card”. Relating something to a hallmark card is quite original as far as I know. =) There are several mistakes here and there concerning grammar/punctuation, so you may want to correct them before getting this published. Aside from that, this poem may be simple but it is also meaningful, so good job. =)

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Hmm... the message in this poem is true: high school does fly by so quick in a blink of an eye. Even so, aside from stating the obvious, this poem could have been a lot more descriptive and creative. Become more creative with words and try to create a more vivid poetic story rather than a bland one. For example, you could mention why high school seems to go by so fast. Anyone who has not been to high school [yet] would not understand why you say it goes by so fast. Please be clearer so all could get a better picture of what you're trying to say. =(

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Umm... I honestly think this poem needs to be worked on. It completely lacks structure and contains various mistakes in both grammar and spelling. Aside from that, it is rather confusing. Who are you describing in the poem? Who exactly is 'they'? Perhaps this was a quick poem you created from the top of your head? If you want to improve it, be more clear in your message, and give it format. Even so, it needs some serious work on. =(