Truly very interesting and very humorous too...I particularly liked the part about Fred going crazy on Ebay...I laugh every time I think about that line!

Truly enjoyable to read and a creative take on what happens after both series. Look forward to reading more episodes. Great pilot episode! A+++++

Spike becoming human. how did that happen? isnt the only way that could be by shanshuing? drinking the blood of a goddess doesnt seem like the way to get there anyhow...

and a little thing: when the first speaks to Angel on p 8. how deos he manage to turn his chair? he is, after all, incorporial, and cant move anything...

Buffy has been in heaven herself. i thereby cannot picture her surprised that her mum is there, or asking all those questions about her.

"Did you know that the first week you were gone; she would come into a room and ask where you were?" hmm. thats not the Buffy I know either... she is rather very realistic about things, and private about her grief.

i feel the whole game-face glamour thing is lacking a whole lot of detail. how did the scoobies know where to find Angel and Spike, and what made them creeped out enough to traquilize them? I mean, surely, being in gameface when coming out after a fight isnt that weird? if they kept them on for a while longer, (and even seemed puzzled about it themselves) the naturlat approach to that would be to talk to them about i, wouldnt it?

and how did they break out from the holding cell? I really didnt understand that about the "Spike-shaped hole" how did that happen